“Kids today!” said Mr. Faulkner.
But the one below is not:
“As far as I’m concerned, there are no rules in creative writing.”
said Mr. McCarthy.
Let’s look at the whole dialogue, this time, punctuated correctly:
“Do you think quotation marks are necessary?” asked Mr. Faulkner.
“Some people say yes; some people say no.”
“I don’t use quotation marks myself,” said Mr. McCarthy. “I think
they just clutter up a page.”
“Do you think this fellow Hynes,” said Mr. McCarthy, “has any
idea what he’s talking about?”
“I have a feeling,” said Mr. Faulkner, “that this fellow Hynes is not
paying any attention to us.”
“There’s no reason for him to listen to us,” said Mr. McCarthy.
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“That’s no excuse,” said Mr. Faulkner.
“What can you do with a young fellow like that?” said Mr.
McCarthy.
“Kids today!” said Mr. Faulkner.
“As far as I’m concerned, there are no rules in creative writing,”
said Mr. McCarthy.