Writing Great Fiction

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Lecture 6: Characters—Round and Flat, Major and Minor


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but can be quite detailed.

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encapsulated in the metaphor we use to describe them: They curve up
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every angle.

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character can do—come vividly to life, be memorable and instantly
recognizable, and be engaging and entertaining—but they can also
surprise, delight, and disappoint us in the same way as real people.
Further, as Forster notes, they don’t just surprise us, but they surprise us
in a convincing way.
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a trustworthy character suddenly turns out to be the murderer
or the double agent. Although this kind of a surprise can be
effective, it also sometimes comes across as a kind of cheating,
and our response can sometimes be a groan or a roll of the eyes.
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