Advanced Writing with English in Use

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Iwas ve rysurp rised toreadth e ill-info r me dreferences to the musician,actressand
writerCiudvVit alein t hereviewofT ur n of t heCen!II"': 6 Stories for the '90s' wh ich
appearediJ;your iss ueo fFebruary12th. \Vrit in g as someonewho knew Cindy ill he r
post-p link days - wem etin19S1inBaliwhereshewas shltl)i nggamelan , andremained
in touch till he rtragicdeathin a car accidentin 1994 - I wo uld like toco r rect theH'ry
falseimpre ssion of Cindythatyourre aders m ayhaveafter reading Eric Bacon'sre view.

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Yourr evi ewer .who foraliterarycriticis surprisi ng lywillingtoassessth e artisticab ility
ofa mus ician. claimsthatC indy's musicalcan-erwas'farfro m distingui shed',Ill'also
claimsthat, becau seCindy showed great ability;L<;a write r. she waswas ti ng hertale n ts
int heyearsbeforeshesta rte d towrite. A mor eresponsib le jo urnalist wouldnothave
madesuchswee p ingsta te m en tswitho utfirst ascertai ni ng thefads, which painta very
differentp ict ur e.

Cindy was awomanofmanv pm1s who, aft e r an ear lv star t as a classicalp ia ni st (she was
pla~i;lgC ho pin and Lisz t0];BrazilianTV at theage'o f 16 ),develope da passion for
drums and percu ssionwhichtook he raroundthe world d uri nga distingu ishedcareeras
a performer,teacheramist ud e ntofherchoseninstruments.She wasalso an
accomplishedactresswhotrainedatL-\~IJ)A,spe nt 18 monthswi t hth e HSC,achieved
crit ica lsuccess wit hh e r film role inDerekAgius 's' St ree t Party ', andfoundre gul arn '
workthroug ho utthe'SOsinCub a.

Xotconte ntwi thred uci ngCindy's e n tireartistic career to ' p un k rocker',yourreviewer
de scribeseven thatperiodas ' unsuccessfu l' -if ,5T op40 sing les and2 albums in just
two anti a half vears is uns uccessful, the nwhoneedssuccess!~IrBacon furtherclaim s
th atsh e was ' disap po inted' not to land the leadingro le in thefilm' Broke nEnglish':she
was , in fact, offered th e ro le , hut refuse dto partici p ate ill th e commerc ial explo ita tion of
aculturesheb e lieved in; s hechoseto make 'St reetPart y'inste ad,

Bypublishing th is letter , youwillrestorebothth ereputationo fare m ar kablewo m an
andt h i sreader's faith inthe integrityo f yo ur newspaper.

You rsfaithfully.

J udit Szilbereky

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AStude ntsofte nwonderwhetherit's worth
goingto Britain tostudy Engli sh.Iwouldsa) '
it depend s0))how much mom'yyOll have ,
andwhe therornot you haw' ataste for
adventure. Somest u dentsmake \"l' rygood
progresswhenstud yingin Britain. andenjoy
the mselvescnormouslv.Other s ,however.
acquire ncar-pe rfectEnglishwithoutever
\isitinganE nglish-spe akingcount ry,All in
a ll, itdepends\"l'rymuch0 11theIndivid ual.
RThis is only theth ird timeI've beento a
footballmatch. andIsti ll don't knowifI
really enjoyit.InsomeW~I)'S,heing part of
sucha hig crowd is ratherafrighte ning
ps pe rienct'.Also .Imustadmit thatIdon't
understand all therules.Hutlit (he same
lime , it isnncxcittngan dfairlyInexpensive
wayof spen dingan afternoo n.Bylindlarge,
It hi nkI dofind football match esenjoyable.
andI p robablywillgoagain.
C I'moftentold I'mluckv tobea woman. but in
fact irs amixed hless il;g.Whileitistrue to
saylh alwomen arest rongerthan menin
many ways,I neverth el essfeelthatsociety
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