1 Rewriting
Although it is tempting to think that the first draft of an essay is adequate, it is almost certain
that it can be improved. After completing your first draft, you should leave it for a day and
then reread it, asking yourself the following questions:
(a) Does this fully answer the question(s) in the title?
(b) Do the different sections of the paper have the right weight (i.e. is it well balanced)?
(c) Does the argument or discussion develop clearly and logically?
(d) Have I forgotten any important points that would support the development?
2 Practice A
You have written the first draft of a 2,000-word essay titled: ‘Assess the relevance of motivation
theories for today’s managers in assisting them to increase employee performance, using the
case of a Japanese car producer operating in the UK.’
Study the introduction to this essay opposite and decide how it could be improved,
listing your suggestions in the table.
Rewriting and
Proofreading
UNIT
1.11
In exams, you have no time for rewriting, but for coursework it is important to take
time to revise your work to improve its clarity and logical development. In both
situations, proofreading is essential to avoid the small errors that may make your
work inaccurate or even difficult to understand.