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itbeginswith
“terrifyingpleasure,”
thispleasurethat’s sobig
thatThereseis scaredofit
evenasshe’s walkinginto
it.Butthenthephysical
descriptionsfallaway.
There’s suchspecificity
there—theuseofleaped,her
bodyvanishinginwidening
circles,thatbeautifulline
“beyondwherethought
couldfollow.” Andthen
suddenlyPatriciaHighsmith
is reminding us of allthose
things that have happened
to Therese and Carol to get
to this moment. If there
was a handbook for writinganeroticscene,I’msureit
wouldsay“Don’t dothat.”
Youcan’t pulloutofthe
moment—we’velost the
haironthebreastsandthe
tinglingpleasure.Butthat’s
whatI loveaboutthescene.
Highsmithwasadeptat
constructingthesevery tightly
plottedcrimenovels,andshe
bringsthattalenttobearin
ThePriceofSalt.Fromthe
momentThereseencounters
Carolinthedepartment
store, we are really building
toward this scene more than a
hundred pages later. That also
puts an unbearable pressure
on this scene to work.Best Sex I Ever Read: Emily M. Danforth on the I“Carol’s fingers tightened in her hair, Carol kissed her on tonly a continuation of the moment when Carol had slwanted to say again, and then the words were erasedfrom Carol’s lips over her neck, her shoulders, that rusharound Carol, and she was conscious of Carol and nothing else, of Cher bare breasts, and then her body too seemed to vanish in widewhere thought could follow. While a thousand memories and mommet her at the store, a thousand memories of Carol’s face, her vtail of a comet across her brain. And now it was pale-blue distflight suddenly like a long arrow. The arrow seemed to cross an ion in space, and not quite to stop. Then she realized that she still cwas herself. She saw Carol’s pale hair across her eyes, and now Caroask if this were right, no one had to tell her, because this could not hagainst her, and felt Carol’s mouth on her own smiling mouth. Theaway from her, the gray eyes calm as she had never seen them, as if tfrom. And it seemed strange that it was still Carol’s face, with the fmouth now as calm as her eyes, as Therese had seen it many timeplain bad heroines will be published by William Morrow on October 20.novelist Emily M. Danforth, author of The
Miseducation of Cameron Post and Plain Bad
Heroines, hadn’t yet come out when she first
encountered this passage from Patricia Highsmith’s
The Price of Salt back in her 20s. At the time, she
wished the scene had been more anatomical.
Today, it’s Highsmith’s sublime metaphors that pull
her in. Although she appreciates Todd Haynes’s
film adaptation, Carol, Danforth insists there’s
something inevitably missing from this iconic
scene. “She’s a fucking comet arcing into space,”
Danforth says. “That’s something you can only do
in prose, that you can’t mimic with two actors ina
hotel stage room.” as told to lila shapiro