Persuasive Communication - How Audiences Decide. 2nd Edition

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TABLE 2.3 Experts’ Comments That Reveal Their Decision Criteria for Making Oversight Decisions


Expert Comments on a Strategic Plan From
General Motors

Expert Comments on an
Annual Report From Control Data

Past
performance



  1. They’ve listed their own and the
    three major competitors’ vehicle sales
    growth, three-year average, the three-year
    profi tability, and market share. Again it’s
    just a listing of data with no insights.
    My sense of a good strategic plan is that
    what one begins with is this data.
    5. They say they had a loss across the
    board. These are good years. These
    are very good years for the country.
    Control Data, I would think, would
    share in that.


Reasons for
performance


[This expert noted in the second
sentence that the plan lacks reasons
that explain the fi rm’s past fi nancial
performance.]


  1. Well, at this point I still don’t
    know what threw their earnings off.
    Sometimes they make phenomenal
    earnings, other times they don’t. And
    other times they have phenomenal
    losses. So is it just that their earnings
    fl uctuate that much even though they
    make that much revenue? Or is there
    some sort of driver involved here
    that’s causing this? Is it correlated with
    something? I still don’t know that yet.


Financial
objectives


[This expert did not indicate whether
he noted the plan’s lack of fi nancial
objectives.]


  1. If this were a presentation to the
    board of directors, I would like to see
    the pro forma statements, too. I’d like
    to see what they expect income to be
    over the next several years, and why
    they think they’re going to get that.
    This has just been a statement of the
    history of the company for the last
    three years. Nothing with respect
    to the future. So again from a board
    member’s point of view, that’s lacking.


Competitive
strategy



  1. I am reminded that the company said
    it was going to move from a low cost to
    a differentiated position [i.e., strategy].
    And that really is the crux of the issue
    for the company.

  2. Now I realize that what is lacking
    in the subsequent ten sections is any
    focused discussion on precisely what
    moving to a differentiated position
    means.
    23. Their strategy is to cut costs rather
    than progress their technology. Nobody
    wants to buy last year’s computer even
    if it is a hundred dollars cheaper.
    57. It doesn’t look like these people
    are on the right track as far as I’m
    concerned. Yes, I think they should
    be concerned about cost, everybody
    should be. But tell me more about
    technology growth. How they plan to
    position themselves in the future.


Action plan 22. I think this [chart of action plans] is
useful information because it’s probably
the important milestones in the next
three or four years within the company.
It would probably be useful to support
this kind of chart with a little bit more
discussion, since these are the actual plans
that have been chosen by management.



  1. I see nothing in here or very little
    about developing technology. This
    business is what strategists would call
    a fast-cycle business. New technology
    becomes obsolete very quickly. Cost
    cutting won’t do much. They better
    have good R&D going on.

  2. Maybe cut the dividends.
    Certainly don’t pay dividends and
    special dividends especially. Instead,
    go to the commercial credit paper
    market or the credit market to raise
    more cash.


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