248 12.4 Using Words Well: speaker langUage and style
rePetition Using a key word or phrase more than once gives rhythm and
power to your message and makes it memorable. Perhaps the bestknown modern
example of repetition in a speech is Martin Luther King Jr.’s ringing declaration
of the words that became the title of his famous August 28, 1963, speech at the
Lincoln Memorial in Washington, D.C.
ParaLLeLism Whereas repetition refers to using identical words, parallelism
refers to using different words but the identical grammatical patterns. In a 2013
speech to Israeli students in Jerusalem, Barack Obama used parallelism to empha
size similarities between Americans and Israelis:
We are enriched by faith. We are governed not simply by men and
women, but by laws. We are fueled by entrepreneurship and innovation.
And we are defined by a democratic discourse...^25
The four sentences that begin “We are enriched,” “We are governed,” “We are
fueled,” and “we are defined” follow the parallel grammatical pattern of pronoun
(we) + verb phrase.
antithesis The word antithesis means “opposition.” In language style, a
sentence that uses antithesis has two parts with parallel structures but contrasting
meanings. Speakers have long recognized the dramatic potential of antithesis.
In his first inaugural address, Franklin Roosevelt declared,
Our true destiny is not to be ministered unto but to minister to ourselves
and to our fellow men.^26
When William Faulkner accepted the Nobel Prize for literature in 1950, he spoke
the following now famous antithetical phrase:
I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail.^27
And when journalist David Brooks addressed the 2013 graduating class of
Sewanee: The University of the South, he advised,
Don’t think about what you want from life, think about what life wants
from you.^28
An antithetical statement is a good way to end a speech. The cadence that it
creates will make the statement memorable.
aLLiteration The repetition of a consonant sound (usually an initial conso
nant) several times in a phrase, clause, or sentence is called alliteration. Allitera
tion adds cadence to a thought. Consider these examples:
alliterative Phrase
discipline and direction
virility, valour, virtue
Seneca Falls, and Selma,
and Stonewall
speaker
Franklin Roosevelt
Winston Churchill
Barack Obama
occasion
First inaugural address^29
Speech to U.S. and civic
Congress^30
Second inaugural address^31
Used sparingly, alliteration can add cadence to your rhetoric.