Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

Inmanycountriestoday,theeatinghabitsandlifestyleofchildrenare
differentfromthoseofprevious generations.Somepeoplesaythishashada
negativeeffectontheirhealth.
Towhatextentdo youagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?


Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.
Writeatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Ithasrecently beensuggestedthatthewaychildreneatandlivenowadayshasledto a
deteriorationintheirhealth.Ientirely


agreewiththisview,and believethatthisalarmingsituation hascomeaboutfor
severalreasons.
To beginwith,thereistheworryingincreaseintheamountofprocessedfoodthat
childrenareeatingathome,withlittle ornoneofthefreshfruitand vegetablesthat
earliergenerationsateevery day.Secondly,moreandmoreyoung people
arechoosingtoeatinfast-foodrestaurants,whichmay beharmless occasionally, but
notevery day.Whattheyeatthereisextremely highinfat,saltandsugar,allofwhich
can bedamagingtotheirhealth.
Thereisalsoadisturbing declineintheamountofexercisethey get.Schoolshave
becomeobsessedwithexams,withtheshockingresultthatsomepupilsnowdo no
sportsatall.Tomakemattersworse,


feweven getanyexerciseonthewaytoandfromschool,asmostofthemgointheir
parents’carsratherthanwalk orcycle.Finally,childrenarespendingfarmoretimeat
home, playingcomputer games,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternet.They nolonger
play outsidewithfriendsortakepartinchallenging outdooractivities.
Tosumup,although noneofthesechangescould, onitsown, havecausedwidespread
harmtochildren’shealth,therecan be
littledoubtthatallofthemtogetherhave hadadevastatingeffect.This,inmy opinion,
can only bereversed byencouragingchildrentoreturntomovetraditionalwaysof
eatingandliving.


( 267 words)


Sample 31


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.
Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:


Thenumberofoverweightchildrenindevelopedcountriesisincreasing.Some
peoplethinkthisisduetoproblems

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