Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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Withthepoliticalwill,suchmeasurescouldreallyreducetheamountofrubbishwe
produce.Certainly nobodywantstosee ourresourcesused upand ourplanet poisoned
bywaste.


( 270 words)


Sample 33


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.
Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:


Recentfiguresshowanincreasein violentcrimeamong youngstersunderthe
ageof18.Somepsychologistsclaimthatthebasicreasonforthisisthat
childrenthesedaysarenotgettingthesocialandemotionallearningtheyneed
fromparentsandteachers.
Towhatextentdo youagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?


Givereasonsforyouranswerandinclude
anyrelevantexamplesfromyourown knowledgeorexperience.
Writeatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Itdoesseemto betruethatparentsfindteachershavelosttheauthoritythey usedto
have,especiallyintheeyesofteenagers.Theyarenolongerseenas
modelsforbehavior:hardwork, politenessand otherpositivequalitiesareseenasold
fashioned.Many young peoplehavenorespectforthesequalitiesorthepeoplewho
representthem.Infact,Ithinkwhen young peopletodayaresorebelliousthatit's
possiblethatboth parentsandteachersareafraidtoexercisetheirauthority.


However,Ido notagreethatthisisthe basicreasonfortheincreaseinteenage
violence.
WhileIbelieveitistruethatalack ofsocialandemotionallearningcontributestothe
problem.Otherfactorsaresurelyinvolved:economicfactors,forexample.Ifachild
comesfromapoorfamilyandtheyliveinlow-quality housinginall undesirablearea,
thisissuretoaffectthechild, howeverlovingtheparentsare.Thereisalsothequestion
ofwho yourfriendsare.Ibelievethatwhen youarein yourteensyourfriendshavemore
influenceon youthan yourparentsorteachers.Atthatage, youwantto bepart ofa
group, orevenagang,andthismightleadto breakingthelawinanumberofways.
Inconclusion,whileIagreethatlack of
socialandemotionallearningfromparentsandteachersisafactorinthegrowth of
teenageviolence,Ido notbelievethatitistheonly ormaincause.


( 255 words)

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