Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1
comics

books

radio

television

film

theatre

Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


modelanswer:


In ourdailylife,wealwayscommunicateinformationthroughthemedia,suchas
television,radio,film,Thesemediahave differentadvantagesand disadvantagesfor us.
Now,Iamgoingtocomparetheadvantagesand disadvantagesofbooks,televisionand
film.
Booksbring usdifferentknowledge.It basesonwhatBookweread.AfamousChinese
traditionalversewhich described booksisatreasure.Wecanfindagolden housein
there.Moreover,whenwewanttoreadit,wecanfinditeasily,suchas bookstore,
library.Wecanalsolearnalot ofwordsfrombooks.Anditcanimprove ourreadingand
writingskills.
However, booksalwaysarenotattractiveforchildren oryoungster.Itisbecause


booksarequiteboring.Alotofwordsandlesspicturesinsidethebooks,compareto
television,television haspicturesandsound,wedon'thavetoreadalotofwordsin
television.Butsomeartistintelevision programmeorfilm, bringabadimageto us.
Thensomechildren oryoungerswillimitatetheirbehaviour.Somefilmalso bringa
wrongmessageto us,Forexample,theyarealwayssmokinginfilms.Itseemsthat
smokingisgoodandsmart.Itcausedmany youngersimitatethemsmoking.
Inconclusion, bookds,televisionandfilm havemanyadvantagesand disadvantages.I
cannotwriteallin here.Andwehavechoosethemediacarefully.


( 231 words)


Thisisan answerwritten byacandidatewho achieved aBand 4score.Hereisthe
examiner'scomment:


Thisanswerdescribessomerelevantadvantagesand disadvantagesofbooks,TVand
films,althoughthesearesometimesunclearornotsufficiently developed.Thescript

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