Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

( 290 words)


Sample 48
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Familieswhodonotsendtheirchildrento government-financedschoolsshould
notberequiredtopaytaxesthatsupportuniversaleducation.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


modelanswer:(Agree)


Familieswho do notsendtheirchildrento government-financedschoolshould notbe
requiredto paytaxesthatsupport


universaleducation.
Whenfamiliessendtheirchildrento non-public(thatis, parochialand private)schools,
theymustpaytuitionand otherschoolexpenses.Spendingadditionalmoneyto pay
taxescreatesaneven greaterfinancialhardshipforthesefamilies.Theymustmake
sacrifices,tryingto haveenoughmoneyto payforschoolin
additionto otherbills.Forexample,myfriendAmaliaisasinglemotherwithaneight-
year-oldson,Andrew.Becausetheysurvivesolely on herincome,moneyistight.
Amaliaworksatleast10 hoursof overtimeeachweektocoverAndrew'sschool
expenses.ThisgivesAmaliaandAndrewlesstimetospendtogether,andsheis
alwayssotiredthatsheisimpatientwith himwhenthey do havefamilytime.Clearly,
thisextraexpenseisan unfair


burdenforhard-working parentslike
Amalia.
Whilesomepeoplemayconsider parochialorprivateschoolto bealuxury,formany
familiesitisessentialbecausetheircommunity'spublicschoolsfailtomeettheir
children'sneeds.Unfortunately, duetoshrinking budgets,manyschoolslackwell-
qualified,experiencededucators.Childrenmay betaughtbysomeonewho
isnotacertifiedteacherorwho knowslittleaboutthesubjectmatter.Some problems
areevenmoreserious.Forexample,thepublichighschoolinmy old
neighborhood/neighbourhood hadserioussafety problems, duetostudentsbringing
guns, drugs,andalcoholtoschool.Aftera gang-relatedshooting occurredatthehigh
school,my parentsfeltthatthey had nochoicebuttoenrollmeinaparochial


schoolthatwasknownforbeing verysafe.Unfortunately,evenwhenfamiliesprefer
publicschools,sometimestheycan'tsendtheirchildrento one.Thesefamiliesare
burdened notonlyforpayingexpensesatanotherschool, butalso by beingforcedto
paytaxestosupportapublicschoolthatthey do notuse.

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