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into businessforthemselves,and hopefully putthepersonaltouch backinto business.I
believethatthehumanworkforcewilldemonstratethatitismore valuablethan
computers.


( 315 words)


Sample 50


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Trafficandhousingproblemsinmajorcitiescouldbesolvedbymovinglarge
companiesandfactoriesandtheiremployeestothecountryside.
Towhatextentdo youagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


modelanswer:


Thesedayswithincreasing urban populations,therearemajorproblems
withcongestionand notonlytheprice, butalsoavailability ofaccommodationin
largecitiesoftheworld.Itseemsthatone possiblesolutioncould betorelocatelarge
companiesandfactoriesaswellastheirrespectiveemployeesoutoftheseurbanareas
andintomoreruralones.Inmy opinion,Istronglyagreethatthiswould haveadesired
effectinmakingcities


morelivable.
To beginwith,thetrafficproblemincities doesn’tonlyexistfromcommutingemployees,
butalsothegeneralpublictravellingaroundthecity.Whilethismay beafact,ifthe
numberofworker’s vehiclesisreduced oncitystreets,alarge percentageoftrafficwill
obviously
declineinrush hours.Forexample, peak hourtrafficisundoubtedlymadeuplargely
ofstafffromcompaniesgoingtoandfromhome.
Secondly,inregardsto housing problems, populationswillalwayscontinueto growin
citiesandthereforeinadvertently decreasethenumberofcheapandavailable
apartments.Thisiscertainly obvious, however,alargeproportion oftheseapartments
areoccupied byemployeesfromlargefirmsandtheir


families.Ifthisworkforceisrelocatedto housingestatesinthecountry,city
apartmentblockswillfallin priceandcertainlyincreaseinavailability.
Inconclusion, byrelocatingworkerstoruralareastoworkandreside, heavytraffic
conditionsandlack ofadequateaccommodationincitycentreswill obviouslychange
forthebetter.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iagreethatthe governmentshouldenforce
suchalawin ordertoincreaseourstandard oflivingin ourhecticcitylife.

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