Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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Oneofthemain benefitsofstayingin onejobissecurity.Changingemployeroften
meansaperiod ofinstability,whereonemay havetothinkaboutmoving house, or
temporarilylosingasteadysourceofincome.Stayingin onejobmeansthese
problemsareavoided.
Anotherbenefitofnotchanging occupationisthatoneisableto gainalot of
experienceandexpertisein hisspecific profession,thusenhancingjobsecurity.One’s
companymayrecognizetheir


loyaltyandrewardtheirservice.Onthe otherhand,thosewho oftenchangejobs
may beseenasunreliable,lackinginexperienceandemployersmightbereluctant
to hireandinvesttraininginthem.
However,thereareargumentsinfavourofchangingjobfrequently.Oneisthataworker
improveshisemployability.Workinginseveraldifferentjobsoftenmeansthatthe
individualhasmoreskills.Such peopleareseenasmoredynamicand versatile.
Anotherbenefitofchangingjobsfrequentlyisthatonenevergetsstuckin arut.From
my ownexperience,IgotboredwhenIspenttoolonginajob.Followingthis,thequality
ofmyworkwouldsuffer.
Ialso believethatemployersgenerally don’ttendto greatlyrewardloyalty or


commitment.Increasedwagesand promotionareofteneasiertoattain by
changingjobs.
Overall,itcan besaidthatthe disadvantagesofchangingjobsaretheadvantagesof
staying put,and viceversa...Inmy opinion,Ifeelthatchangingjobsevery onceina
whileisofmorebenefit.


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Sample 58


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Itiswidelybelievedthatchildrenofdifferentlevelsofintelligenceshouldbe
taughttogether,whileothersthinkthatmoreintelligentchildrenshouldbe


taughtseparately.
Discussandpresentyourownopinion.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


modelanswer:


In pasteducationalinstitutions,children havebeentaughttogetherbased onage
regardlessofintellectualability displayedatschool.Alternatively,alargeproportion of
thepopulation believesthereshould be

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