Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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Tosumup,Ithinkthatevery personchoosesforhimselfwhatheorshewants.Ifone
wantsbettercareerandmoreresponsibilitiesthenasmallcompanyis betterchoice.
Otherwise,workingforalargecompanymay beagood optiontoo.


( 286 words)


Sample 74


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthis
task.


Youhavedecidedto giveseveralhours ofyourtimeeachmonthtoimprovethe
communitywhereyoulive.
Whatisonething youwilldotoimproveyourcommunity? Why?
Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyourchoice.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


modelanswer:


IthinkthequestionwhatwouldIdoifI
hadachancetoimprovemycommunityis difficult.Ihaveinmymindmanythings,the
improvementofwhichwillmakeourcommunity betterplacetolivebuttheyallrequire
theparticipation ofmany peopleand,moreover,theyrequireinvestments,whichIcan
notprovide.Forexample,mycommunityisquitenoisy.Wehavethe hugemalljustin
frontofourcommunity,sotrafficjamsareverycommonforthis place.Ithinkthatthe
construction ofafew pass-byroadswillbenefitallpeoplewholivehereaswellas
peoplewho drivebyevery day.
Unfortunately,thequestioniswhatIcan doformycommunity givingafewhours ofmy
timeeverymonth.IthinkIcannot domuch, butIstillcan helpsomeoneinmy
community.Forexample,Ican baby-sit.Iknowacoupleoffamilieswithlittle


children,whocan notaffordtospendmuchmoney onthebaby-sitter.Oneofthese
familiesisasinglemomwithalittle girl.Julia,thisishername,isawaitressina
restaurant.Sheisagreatpersonandwe becameclosefriends.So,sometimesI offer
herhelpwith herchildwhenshehastoworkintheevenings.Anotherfamily hastwo
funnylittletwins.Onetimetheir parentsaskedmeto babysittheirchildren becausethey
hadtoattendan unexpected presentation.
Ithinkthiskind ofhelp bringsmany benefitstomycommunity.Firstofall, people
becomefriendlier.Forexample,thosefamilies,whichImentionedabove, became

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