Fromtheotherside, parentshaveagreatinfluenceonchildren'successinschool
too.Forexampleifparentsshowaninterestintheirchild'sprogressandtalkto himor
herabouttheimportanceof
learningIthinktheirchildwilllistentothemand do hisorherbest.
Personally,Ibelievethatrelationships between parentsandachild playanessential
roleinchild'ssuccessinschool.Iftheserelationshipsarecloseand
wholeheartedIamsurethatparentsshould notbeafraid ofbadinfluencefromthe
outside.
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Sample 78
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.
Itisbetterforchildrento growupinthecountrysidethaninabigcity.
Do youagreeordisagree?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestodevelopyouressay.
Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
modelanswer:
Somepeoplebelievethatitisbetterforchildrento growupinthecountrysidethanina
bigcity.However, otherpeoplethinkthatabigcity givesmoreopportunities
anditisgoodforthelongrun.Personally,forseveralreasonsIthinkthatitisbetterfor
children'shealthto growupinthecountry.
Firstofall,itisveryimportantforachildto growupinahealthyenvironment.Children
needfreshair, notpolluted bythe hugeamountofcarsandfactoriesofthemoderncity.
Inthecountrytheycanspendmoretimeexercisingandwalkingwiththeirfriends.
ScientistssaythatnowchildrenspendthesameamountoftimewatchingTVasthey do
atschool.
Probably,thepossibilitytojointheirfriendsforaplaywillchangethis proportion.
Anotherimportantaspectofthisisthatparentswillhavemoretimetospendwiththeir
childrenasaresultofeliminatingtrafficjamsand decreasing drivingtimeasawhole.
Fromtheotherside,children havesomeadvantageslivinginabigcity.Forexample,
they havemoreopportunitiestochoosefromwhattheywantto do.They
canchoosetoattend balletschool,school ofart, gymnastics,etc.Forthelongrun,itis
goodforthem.Theywillbebetter preparedforaliveina"realworld"andtheywillhave
morechancestomakea goodcareerandsucceed.Moreover,abigcity usually has
manyentertainingcenterswithmovietheatresand playstations.WhenIwasachildI
likedto gotothemovietheatrewithmy parentstowatch a premiere.
Onemorereasontochooseabigcityforachildisthatacity providesbetterlive
conditionsandservicessuchasmedical, dental,etc.Myfriendlivedinthecountryfora