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bonesandmusclesbuttheirabilitytomakedecisions,analyzethings,make
conclusions,whichisvery goodfortheirfuture.


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Sample 81
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Do youagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Watchingtelevisionisbadforchildren.Usespecificreasonsandexamplesto
supportyouropinion.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Someparentsbelievethatwatchingtelevisionisbadfortheirchildren.So,theytry
torestricttheirchildrenfromwatchingTV.However, otherparents
thinkthatthereisnothing badinwatching
TV.Personally,IthinkthatwatchingTV bringschildren only benefitsunlesstheyspend
infrontofTVsetlessthenacouple ofhoursdaily.Forthefollowingreasons,whichIwill
mention bellow,Ibelievethattelevision playsanessentialroleinchild's development.
Firstofall,television helpsachildtoextenthisorherrangeofinterests.Childrencan
find outmany newthingsandmakemanyexiting discoveriesforthemselves.Inaddition
tothesepractical benefitstelevisionimproveschildren's vocabulary,theirmemoryand
givesthemtheopportunityto gainmoreknowledge. Ithinkitisveryessentialforachild.
Ofcause,someonecansaythatthereare plenty ofdifferentrecoursesof
informationsuchasbooksandteachers.But,Ithink,in ourmodernworldchildren


mustlearnfasterand useallcontemporarytechnologyin ordertosucceed.
Second ofall,watchingcognitive programshelpschildrentolearnmoreaboutwildlife,
ourenvironmentandabouttheimportanceofpreserving ourforest
andwildanimalsthatlivethere.
Scientistssaythatachildshould notwatch
TVmorethen 40minutessuccessively.Forexample,mymotheralwaysmadeus have
abreakafterwatchingTVmorethen halfan hourandletoureyesrestforseveral
minutesbeforeturning ontheTVagain.Ithinkitisthebestsolution.
Tosumup,Ibelievethattelevision giveschildrenandallpeopletheopportunitytolearn
whatcan notbelearnfrombooks.Televisionandmoviesin particularallow peopleto
feeltherealityandseewhattheywillmostlikely notbeabletoseeintheir


lives.Personally,whenIwasachild Ilikedtowatchcognitiveprogramsaboutwild
animals.Unfortunately,myfamily had only oneTV, buttheseprogramsweretheonly
onesweallwantedtowatch.So,wegatheredin ourlivingroomandwatchedthemin
completesilenceand Ialwaysrememberthosemomentswith asmileonmyface.

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