Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

modelanswer:


Somepeoplebelievethatitisbetterforchildrento growupinthecountrysidethanina
bigcity.However, otherpeoplethinkthatabigcity givesmoreopportunities
anditisgoodforthelongrun.Personally,forseveralreasonsIthinkthatitisbetterfor
children'shealthto growupinthecountry.


Firstofall,itisveryimportantforachildto growupinahealthyenvironment.Children
needfreshair, notpolluted bythe hugeamountofcarsandfactoriesofthemoderncity.
Inthecountrytheycanspendmoretimeexercisingandwalkingwiththeirfriends.
ScientistssaythatnowchildrenspendthesameamountoftimewatchingTVasthey do
atschool.
Probably,thepossibilitytojointheirfriendsforaplaywillchangethis proportion.
Anotherimportantaspectofthisisthatparentswillhavemoretimetospendwiththeir
childrenasaresultofeliminatingtrafficjamsand decreasing drivingtimeasawhole.
Fromtheotherside,children havesomeadvantageslivinginabigcity.Forexample,
they havemoreopportunitiestochoosefromwhattheywantto do.They


canchoosetoattend balletschool,school ofart, gymnastics,etc.Forthelongrun,itis
goodforthem.Theywillbebetter preparedforaliveina"realworld"andtheywillhave
morechancestomakea goodcareerandsucceed.Moreover,abigcity usually has
manyentertainingcenterswithmovietheatresand playstations.WhenIwasachildI
likedto gotothemovietheatrewithmy parentstowatch a premiere.
Onemorereasontochooseabigcityforachildisthatacity providesbetterlive
conditionsandservicessuchasmedical, dental,etc.Myfriendlivedinthecountryfora
whileand onetimeheand hisfamily hadto driveacoupleofhourstothe nearest
medicalcenterwhen hischild got
aheavycough.
Tosummarize,Iagreewiththosepeople
whowanttoraisetheirchildreninacity.Theplenty ofopportunitiesoffered by acity
helpschildrentofindwhattheyreallylikeand bethebestatit.Moreover,
despitetheairpollution,children geta bettermedicalservicethatisgoodfortheir
health.


( 394 words)


Sample 85


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Do youagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Childrenshouldberequiredtohelp
withhouseholdtasksassoonasthey are abletodoso.


Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

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