Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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allpainkillersfromall distributorsand paytoallinjuredcustomersfortheirtreatment.It
costalot ofmoneyforthecompany butitsaveditsimageandclients.Itwasavery
difficult decision, butthepresidentofthecompany understoodthatitwouldcosthim
even
moreinthefuturebecausehewould notbeabletoreturnclients'respect.Loosing
customersmeansforacompanyloosing
itsprofit.
Second ofall,in ordertosucceedinthemodernworldcompanieshavetocompetewith
each other.Manycompanieslosetheirprofitdecreasing pricesontheir products.They
do notaspireforextra


profitbutforclients'satisfaction.Companiesdoitbecausetheywanttheir products
soldandtheircustomerssatisfied.They offerdiscounts,free
delivery,freeservice,freeInternetaccess, goodreturnservice,etc.Allthesearedone
tomaketheiroldcustomershappyandattractnewclients.
Tosumup,Ithinkacompany,whichthe only goalisprofitwillnotsucceed nowadays.
Otherwise,companiesthatrespecttheirclientsandwanttoseethemsatisfiedwill
makeafortune.


( 311 words)


Sample 89


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Businessesshouldhireemployeesfortheirentirelives.
Do youagreeordisagree?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Iwould havetocompletely disagreewiththestatementabove.Inthefollowing
paragraphsIwilloutlinethebasicconceptsofmy position.
Firstofall,Iwillleastthemajor disadvantagesforemployers.Onthetoday'smarketa
companymustbeveryflexiblein ordertocompetewith other


firms.So,imaginethesituationwhen acompanycan notfireitsemployeestostay on
themarket.Itwillleadtoloosing not onlyaprofit, buttheclients,marketshareand
competitiveability.Now,imaginethesituationwhenacompanyisgrowingfast,
everythingisgoodandthenextfewyearsaregoingto beexcellent.So,employers need
morepeopletoextendthe
production.However, nobodycantellwhatwillhappeninafewyears.Inthiscase,
employerswillbeafraidto hirenew

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