Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

Fromtheoneside,learningthrough one's personalexperiencebringsmany benefits.
Firstofall,scientistssaythatpersonalexperiencehasgreaterimpactonaperson.I
havetoagreewiththis.Takeforexamplechildren.Theywillnotbelievetheir
parentsthatsomethingcan hurtthemuntil
theytryitandmakesureinit.Furthermore,mostlikelytheywillrememberthis
experiencelonger.Second ofall, peoplelearn howtoanalyzetheirmistakes,make
conclusionsand nexttimetrytoavoidthem.So,Ithinkitisagreatexperiencethat
makespeoplestronger,moreself-confidentand persistent.They gainmoreknowledge
andexperiencethatwillbevery helpfuland valuableinthefuture.
Fromtheotherside,listeningtotheadvice offamilyandfriendsbringsmany benefits
too.Parentswith greatpatiencepassdowntheirknowledgeandexperiencetotheir
children.Theyteachthemallthey knowandtheywanttheirchildren do notmakethe
samemistakes.Inadditiontothose practicalbenefits,learningfrom


someone'sadviceispainless.Forexample, parentsnowadaysvery oftentalktotheir
childrenaboutdrugs.Ithinkitisagreatexamplewhen oneshould nottry drugsin order
to gain newexperience.Ithinkitisacasewhenchildrenmusttrusttheir
parents.
Tosumup,Ithinkitiswisetocombine both ofthesewaystolearnandtrytoanalyze
personalmistakesaswellasnot personal.Ithinktogethertheycan greatlysimplify
one'slifeandmakethewaytosuccessshorter.


( 350 words)


Sample 99


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Somepeopleliketodo onlywhatthey alreadydowell.
Otherpeopleprefertotrynewthings andtakerisks. Whichdo youprefer?Use
specificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourchoice.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Formmyeverydayexperienceand observationIthinkthatallpeoplewhosucceededin
lifehadtowork hardand gainmoreknowledgeandexperiencein ordertoreachtheir
goals.Fromtheother hand, peoplewhoalltheirlifedothingstheyalready dowelland
do notimprove


theirknowledgedo notmoveforward. I basemystatementonthefollowing points.First
ofall, peoplewhowanttosucceedmustconstantlyimprovetheirknowledgeand gain
moreexperience.Moreover,theymustbethebestattheirprofession.So,they needto
try newthings,takeriskssometimesandwork hard.

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