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programstheninfluencepeople, particularly young people,inthecountrieswherethey
areshown.
Also, becausetelevision networksneedtoattractlargeaudiencestosecuretheir
financialsurvival,theymustproduce programswhichareinterestingtoabroadrangeof
people.InAustraliathisrangeis


very broad becauseweareamulticulturalsocietyand peopleofallagesliketowatch
television.Tointerestallthesedifferent people,mosttelevision programsareshortin
length,fullofactionandexcitement, do notrequiremuchintelligenceor
knowledgeto understand,andfollow universalthemescommontoallcultures,suchas
loveandcrime.Television programswhichconcentrateon ordevelopthemespertinent
to oneparticularculturearenotsosuccessfulbecausetheyinterestasmaller
audience.
Neverthelesswemuchacknowledgethattelevision doeshavesomepositiveeffects on
thecultureswithinasocietyaswell.Peoplewho do notlivewithintheirownculture
can,inalimitedway,accessitthroughthemulticulturalstation onthetelevision.For
example,Aboriginal


childrenwho havegrown upinwhitefamilies, ormigrantsandinternationalstudents
livinginAustralia,canwatch programsfromtheirowncultureonthetelevision.
Inconclusion,Iholdtheviewthattelevision promotesandstrengthensthosecultures
thatarewealthyandinfluentialwhileitweakenstheculturesthatarealreadyina
weakened position


Sample 131


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Withoutcapitalpunishment(thedeathpenalty)ourlivesarelesssecureand
crimesofviolenceincrease.Capitalpunishmentinessentialtocontrol


violenceinsociety.
Towhatextentdo youagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Beforetalkingabouttheessentialroleof death penalty,you havetothinkaboutthe
meaning,andthepurpose, ofany kind of punishment.Ifyouconsiderthatthe purposeis
to preventtheguiltyfrombeing nastyagain, youcan beseduced byanargumentationin
favourofthesuppression ofcapitalpunishment.Butyou havetothinkaboutanother
aspectoftheproblem:apunishmentisalso usefultoimpress


people,tomakethemfearthelaw.Infact,let'staketheexampleofayoungmisfit,
which hasgrowninaviolentatmosphere,influenced by olderdelinquents,etc...Helives
inthestreets, he'sgotnoaimbuttosurvive.Thisisthekind ofpersonwhocould

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