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howwedefine'responsibleforbringingthechildren up'.Atitssimplest,itcouldmean
givingthefinancialsupport necessaryto provideahome,foodandclothesand
makingsurethechildissafeandreceivesanadequateeducation.Thiswould bethe
basicdefinition.
Thereis, however,anotherpossibleway of definingthatpartofthequotation.Thatwould
sayitisnotjustthefathersresponsibilityto providethebasicsforhischildren,whilehis
wifeinvolvesherselfintheeverydayactivity ofbringingthemup.Rather, heshould
sharethosedaily duties,spendasmuchtimeashisjoballowswith hischildren, play
withthem,readtothem, help directlywiththeireducation, participateveryfullyintheir
livesandencouragethemtosharehis.
Itisthissecond,fuller,conceptof
'fatherhood'thatIaminfavourof,
althoughIalsorealisehowdifficultitistoachievesometimes.Theeconomicand
employmentsituationinmanycountriesmeansthatjobsaregettingmore, notless,
stressful,requiringlong hoursand perhapslongjourneystoworkaswell.Thereforeit
mayremainformanyadesirableidealratherthananachievablereality.


Sample 133


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Millionsofpeopleevery yearmovetoEnglish-speakingcountriessuchas
Australia,BritainorAmerica,inordertostudy atschool,collegeoruniversity.
Whydosomanypeoplewanttostudyin


English?
WhyisEnglishsuchanimportantinternationallanguage?
Givereasonsforyouranswer..


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


IamnotsurprisewhenIreadinthe newspapersthatmany peoplemovetoEnglish
speakingcountries.Iamanengineerinaprocesscontrolsinceten yearsandI
understandthenecessity ofEnglishlanguage.Forexample,when Ireadtechnical
Englishspecifications,whenImeetJapaneseIndustrialsto buildtogethersome
electronicmaterialsor


whenIgo on holidaysinItalywherethe bestway(forme)tocommunicateistospeak
English.Therefore,today,it's necessarytolearnEnglishandthebestwayistostudy
inEnglishassoonas possiblewhenweareatschoolbutalsowhenwehaveajob.It's
soImportanttocommunicatewithforeigners, becauseof
work.Forexample:toseafoodsinUSA,to buildelectroniccardswiththeJapanese,to
obtainacertificationwithFDA(American organization)in ordertosellsome

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