Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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Toconclude,itisclearthatworld povertyisaseriousproblemand yettheproblem
could beeasedifgovernmentsandcompeniesgavemorethoughtto payingsalaries
onamoreequitablebasisandiftheystartedtocontributemoremoneytothosein
need.


Sample 152


Smokerscancausethemselvesserioushealthproblems.Thechoicetosmokeis
madefreely andwithknowledgeofdangers.
Smokersshouldthereforeexpecttopaymoreformedicaltreatmentthannon-
smokers.


Towhatextentdo youagreewiththisstatement?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

modelanswer:


Everyonehasthechoiceofbeingasmoker ornot.Thepeoplewhochoosetosmoke
doso knowingthereisarisk ofcausing harmfuldamagetothemselves.However, I do
notentirelyagreethatthesepeopleshould haveto paymoretoreceiveallthemedical
treatmentthey need.


Ithinktherearemanysituationsinwhichamedicalproblemhasnothingto dowith
whetherapersonsmokesornot.Inthesecases,whereanillnesshasnorelationto
smoking,thenIbelievethatsmokersshould notberequiredto paymorethan other
peoplefortheirmedicaltreatment.Mostcaraccidents,forexample, haveno
connectionwithsmoking,andthepeoplewhoareinjured oughtto havethesame
medicalhelp,regardlessofthecost.Andwhataboutthecommonflu-itdoesnot
seemjustifiabletomethatasmokershould haveto paymoretoseeadoctorforan
illnesswecanallcontract.


Ontheotherhand,Iagreethatasmokershould paymorethananon-smokerforthe
necessarytreatmentofanycondition
which hasbeencaused bysmoking.The


principlethatpeopleshouldtakeresponsibilityfortheirownactionsisa good one.
Consequently,ifapersonchoosestosmokeknowingthatthishabitcancauseserious
health problems,thenthereisnoreasonwhythecommunity oraninsurancecompany
should haveto payformedicaltreatmentforanillnesswhichcould havebeenavoided.
Inmanycountries,cigarettepacketshaveaclearwarningthatsmokingcancause
health problemsandso nosmokercanclaimnotto knowthedanger.Lungcanceris
sometimesafataldiseaseandthetreatmentisbothlengthyandexpensive,anditis
unfairforthesmokertoexpect

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