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Sample 154


ShouldparentsbeobligedtoimmunisetheirchildrenagainstcommonBand 9
answerchildhooddiseases?
Ordoindividualshavetherighttochoosenottoimmunisetheirchildren?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

modelanswer:


Theissueofwhetherweshouldforce parentstoimmunisetheirchildrenagainst
common diseasesis,inmy opinion, asocialratherthanamedicalquestion.Sincewe
arefreetochoosewhatweexposeourbodiestointheway offood, drink, orreligionfor
thatmatter,whyshouldthequestion ofmedical'treatment' beany different?


Medicalresearchersand governmentsare primarilyinterestedin overallstatisticsand
trendsandinmoney-savingschemes


whichfailtotakeintoconsiderationtheindividual'sconcernsandrights.While
immunisationagainstdiseasessuchastetanusandwhoopingcoughmay be
effective,littleinformationisreleasedabouttheharmfuleffectsofvaccinationswhich
cansometimesresultinstunted growth oreven death.
Thebodyisdesignedtoresistdiseaseandtocreateitsown naturalimmunitythrough
contactwiththatdisease.Sowhen
childrenaregivenartificialimmunity,wecreateavulnerablesocietywhichisentirely
dependentonimmunisation.Intheeventthatmassimmunisation
programmesweretocease,thesocietyasawholewould bemoreatriskthanever
before.
Inadditionthereistheissueoftherights oftheindividual.Asmembersofa


society,whyshouldwebeobligedtosubjectourchildrentothispotentially harmful
practice?Somepeoplemayalso beagainstimmunisation onreligious groundsand
theirneedsmustalso beconsidered.
ForthesereasonsIfeelstronglythatimmunisation programmesshould notbe
obligatoryandthattheindividualshould havetherighttochoosewhetherornotto
participate.


Sample 155


Shouldparentsbeobligedtoimmunisetheirchildrenagainstchildhood
diseases?
Ordoindividualshavetherighttochoosenottoimmunisetheirchildren?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
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