Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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Thebenefitsoftakingayearoffare plentiful.Onapersonallevel,studentswhotravel
awayfromhomedeveloptheirindependenceandself-confidence.On a
culturallevel,theylearnaboutviewpoints,traditionsand perspectivesdifferentfrom
theirown.Professionally,studentsgetatasteofdiverseworkplaces,whichmightinspire
apossiblecareerinterest.Intellectually,theyexaminetheirown


beliefsandideasinrelationtothoseof othersinanewenvironment.Allthese
advantagescombinetomakeastrongcasefortakingtheone-yearbreak.


Nevertheless,therearealso dangersinvolvedintakingsuchalong break.
Academically,themain drawbackisthatstudentscan getsidetrackedfromtheirstudies.
Ayearisalongtimeandstudentscouldlosethegoodstudy habitsandsense of
disciplinethey hadwhentheywerein aformalacademicstructure.Ifthey begin
working,theycouldalso bedeludedintothinkingthatthey’remakingalotofmoney.
Theycouldlosethebenefitofcollegeoruniversityeducationandthechancetoearna
higherincomealltheirlives.


Inconclusion,whethertotakeayear-long break ornotisanindividualdecision.Each
young personshouldconsiderhisor hermotivationscarefullyand decideonwhat’s
mostdesirable.Timeisapreciousresourceand peopleofallages,including young
people,shouldtreatitwithrespect.


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Sample 166


Universitiesshouldacceptequalnumbersofmenandwomenineverysubject.


Towhatextentdo youagreewiththisstatement?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Genderissueshavebeenincreasinginimportancethroughthecenturies.Inalmost
everysphereofhumanactivity,therehasbeenamovementtowards greaterequality
betweenmenandwomen.AlthoughIagreethatuniversitiesshould opentheirdoorsto
allstudentsalike,in
my view,they need notsetafixedlimitonthenumberofmenandwomentheyacceptin
eachsubject.Thebasesformy views
arepsychologicaland personal.


Psychologically-speaking,menandwomenaresimply different,thoughthey havethe
samepotentialforgreatness.Forexample,womentendto bemoreintuitive,sensitiveto
othersandcaring.Thismeanstheymayfeeldrawn, onthebasisoftheir personalities,
tocertain kindsof professionssuchasteaching, nursing, or


psychology,evenifallfieldsareopentothem.Insuchacontext,itisbestfor
universitiestochoosethebestapplicants,regardlessofgender.


Personally,studentsneedto discovertheirtruecalling.Thisisanindividualmatterand
isnotinfluenced bytheuniversitiesreservingseatsformen orwomen.Forexample,if

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