The Future Poetry

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320 The Future Poetry


have no strength to bear and strong stresses are compelled to
efface themselves while small insignificant sounds take up their
burden, is not a real and natural verse movement; it is an artificial
structure which will never find an agreed place in the language.
No make-believe can reconcile us to such rhythms as Sid-
ney’s


I

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nwi

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nd|o

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rwa

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|te

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r’s||strea

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mdo ̆re ̆|qui

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re to ̆be ̆|wri

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t.|

Here two intractably iambic feet followed by a resolutely short
syllable are compelled to dance a jig garbed as two spondees fol-
lowed by a solitary long syllable; so disguised, they pretend to be
the first half of a pentameter, — the second half with its faultless
and natural metre and rhythm is of itself a condemnation of its
predecessor. Neither can one accept Bridges’


Flo

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wery ̆do ̆|mai

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nthe ̆flu ̆sh|i

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ng so

_
ft|cro

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wdi

_
ng|lo

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veli ̆ne ̆ss|o

_
fSpri

_
ng|

where length is forced on an inexorable short like the “ing”
of “flushing” and “crowding” and a pretence is made that an
accentual iamb, “of Spring”, can be transformed into a quan-
titative spondee. Still worse, still more impossible to digest or
even to swallow, is his forced hexameter ending,


the ̆se ̆|re

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nely ̆so ̆|le

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mn spe

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lls.|

There two successive accentual trochees and a terminal long
syllable are turned by force or by farce into a closing dactyl
and spondee. Such are the ungainly antics into which the nat-
ural movements of verse have to be compelled in this game of
thrusting the laws of quantity of an ancient language upon a
modern tongue which has quite another spirit and body. What
is possible and natural in a clear-cut ancient language where
there is a more even distribution of the voice and both the short
and long syllables can get their full sound-value, is impossible
or unnatural in the English tongue; for there the alternation
of stresses with unstressed short and light sounds is a constant
and inescapable feature. That makes all the difference; it turns
this kind of verse into a frolic of false quantities. In any case,

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