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Here are some characteristics of revising and editing that can guide how
you read your own writing and the comments you offer to other writers:
RevIsIng edItIng
treats writing as a work
in progress
Focuses on new possibilities
both within and beyond the text
Focuses on new questions or
goals
Considers both purpose and
readers’ needs
encourages further discovery
treats writing as an
almost-finished product
Addresses obvious errors and
deficiencies
Focuses on the text alone
Considers grammar, punctu ation,
spelling, and style
Polishes up the essay
Again, writing is a process, and revising is an integral part of that pro-
cess. Your best writing will happen in the context of real readers’ respond-
ing to your drafts. Look at the acknowledgments in any academic book,
and you will see many people credited with having improved the book
through their comments on drafts and ideas. All academic writers rely on
conversations with others to strengthen their work.
the PeeR editing PRocess
We emphasize that the different stages of writing — early, later, and final —
call for different work from both readers and writers because writers’
needs vary with each successive draft. these stages correspond to what
has been called the composition pyramid (Figure 10.1).* the composition
*We thank susannah Brietz-Monta and Anthony Monta for this idea.
FIGURE 10.1 the Composition Pyramid
Situation Issues Thesis Audience
Organization
Effective use of sources
to support thesis
Style and
grammar
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