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totheirparents'extrawealth,forexample,
by going onforeign holidays.
Ontheotherhand, however,therearethosewhoclaimthatwhen both parentswork,
theirchildren do notgetenoughsupportandattention,meaningthatthechildrenmight
notdoaswellatschool becausethereisno oneathouseto providesupportwithsuch
thingsashomework orexamrevision.Theabsenceofaparentat homecouldmakeit
easierforchildrento getinvolvedinsuchthingsasdrugsor undertakedrinking.
WhenIwasgrowingup, bothmy parentsworkedandIwasalwayswellprovidedfor.
Ontheotherhand,Ithinkthatitwouldsometimeshavebeen betterifIcould have
seenmoreofmy parents.
Inconclusion,Ibelievethatwecannotchangethefactthatboth parentshavetowork
nowadays.Itisnotanidealsituation,


butifparentsmaketimefortheirchildrenintheeveningsandattheweekends,thenthe
childrenwillnotsufferinanyway.Itmustbestatedthattheextraincome generated by
bothparentsworking,makesforamuch higherstandard oflivingwhich benefitsthe
wholefamily.


( 295 words)


Sample 24


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.
Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:


Ifyoucouldchangeoneimportantthing aboutyourhometown,whatwouldyou
change?
Usereasonsandspecificexamplesto


supportyouranswer.


Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.
Writeatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


IfIcouldchangeonethingaboutmy hometown,Ithinkitwould bethefactthatthere’s
nosenseofcommunity here.
Peopledon’tfeelconnected,they don’tlook outforeach other,andthey don’tgetto
knowtheirneighbors.
Peoplecomeand goalothere.Theychangejobsfrequentlyandmoveon.Thismeans
thatthey don’tputdownrootsin


thecommunity.They don’tjoincommunity organizationsandthey’renotwillingto get
involvedintryingto

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