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Sample 80


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Somepeoplethinkthatchildrenshouldbegintheirformaleducationata very
early ageandshouldspendmostoftheirtimeonschoolstudies.
Othersbelievethatyoungchildren


shouldspendmostoftheirtimeplaying.Comparethesetwo views. Whichview
do youagreewith? Why?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Peoplelearnthroughtheirentirelives.Curiositywasalwaysthebasiccharacteristicofa
human being.Wealwayswantto breaklimitsandlearnmore.Atthispointsomepeople
thinkthatchildrenshould begintheirformaleducationataveryearlyageandspend
mostoftheirtimeonschoolstudies.Thiswillhelpthemtosucceedinthefuture.
However,forseveralreasons,whichIwill


explain bellow,Ithinkthatchildrenshould notstudyataveryearlyage.
Ofcause,childrenwho begintostudyata veryearlyagehavemorechancestosucceed
inthefuture.They gainmore knowledgeandexperiencewhichare pricelessand
valuable.Inaddition,studyingmorenowtheywillgivethemtheopportunityto perfect
theirknowledgeinthefutureand becomebetter
professionals.
However,Ithinkthateverychildmust havehisorherchildhood.Childrenshouldlearn
through playingandcommunicationwiththeirfriendsand parents.Ithinkthatsuch
basicqualitiesaskindness,self-confidenceandjustagoodsenseofhumorcan notbe
gainedfromstudying.Childrenshouldmoretimespendwiththeirfamily, playingand
learningwiththeirparents.


Imaginethatachildinstead ofplayingwith hisfriendsdoeshishomeworkandfeel
exhaustedandtired.Anotherimportantaspectofthisisthatchildrenattheirearlyages
needmoreexercise becauseatthisagethedevelopmentoftheirbodyisavery
essentialaspect.Childrenfirstofallmustbehealthy.
Tosumup,Ithinkthatchildrenshould havetheircarelesschildhoodwith no
responsibilities.Moreover,Iamsurethat playing helpsthemdevelop notonlytheir

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