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Parentsorotheradultrelativesshould
makeimportantdecisionsfortheir( 15 to 18 year-old)teenagechildren.
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Parentsareinmostcasesourfirstteachersandfriends.FrommyeverydayexperienceI
havetoagreewiththestatementthatimportantdecisionsshould bemadeby our
parentsoradultrelatives.Inthefollowing paragraphsIwillgivemyreasonstosupport
thisstatement.
Firstofall,teenagechildren havethetendencytoliveintheirownfantasies.


They do notclearly understandtherulesofareallife.WhenIwas18 yearsold Ithought
thattheworldwasperfectandeverythingseemedto besimple.
Teenagersarebasicallyinexperienced;theyaspireforindependenceandtrytomake
theirfirststepstowardsfreedom. Ithinkthatitislikestartingtowalkwhen a baby
needsitsparentsforsupport.Anindependentlifeisabigandsignificant partina
person'slife.So,my pointisthat
itisveryimportanttomakethisstepright.Second ofall,Ithinkthatparentshaveright
tointerfereintheirchildren'slives.They needtoknowwhatkind offriends
theirchildren haveand howchildrenspendtheirsparetime.ForexampleIhadan
eighteen yearsoldfriendwho gotreallyangrywith hisparentswhenthey
prohibited himto befriendswithayoung
man.Somehowhisparentsfound outthatthatyoungmanwasoccasionallytaking
drugs.Thatmanwasdeadinayear becauseofdrugabuse.Afterthataccidentmy
friendthanked hisparentsforthatinterference.
Finally,Ithinkteenagechildrenshould bemoreopen-mindedwiththeirparents.Itwill
helpthemtomaketherightchoiceandavoidmanymistakes.
Tosumup,Ibelievethatyoung peopleshouldtrusttheirparentsbecausethey
wishtheirchildren onlythebest.


( 291 words)


Sample 84


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Itisbetterforchildrento growupinthecountrysidethaninabigcity.
Do youagreeordisagree?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestodevelopyouressay.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

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