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peopleandextendtheirbusinessbecausetheywillnotbeabletofirethemif
something goeswrong.Anotherimportantaspectofthisisthatacompanycan not have
thebestemployees.Itcan nothire
thebetteronewithoutdismissinganotheremployee.
Whatkind ofdisadvantageswillhavean
employeeinexchangeforthiskind ofjobsecurity?Firstofall,itwillbevery difficultto
findajobifoneisnotthebest, becauseanemployerdoesnotwanttospendmoney on
one'seducation.Besides,employerwillnothaveachancetofire
oneifhedoesnotdo hisjobwell.Second ofall,employeeswiththiskind ofsecurity
tend notto perfectthemselvesbecause
aftertheyarehiredtheycan notlosetheirjob.
Inconclusion,Iwouldliketoaddthatthisstatementhassomepositiveaspectstoo
suchasconstancy,astrongspiritofthecompany,etc.Thissystemtakesplacein
Japanandsomecompaniessucceededin
it.ButIthinkthatthereason ofitsubsistsintheJapanesetraditions,theparticular
culturalfeatures, habitsandcustoms.However, ontoday'smarkethereinthe


UnitedStatesacompanycan notaffordto hireemployeesfortheirentirelife.


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Sample 90


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


Shouldacitytrytopreserveitsold,historicbuildingsordestroythemand
replacethemwithmodernbuildings?Usespecificreasonsandexamplesto
supportyouropinion.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
modelanswer:


Somepeoplethinkthatold, historic buildingsareno needforthecityandtheyshould
bedestroyedandreplacedwithmodern ones.However, otherpeople believethat
historicbuildingsmustbe preservedin orderto knowandremember ourpast.For
severalreasonsthatIwillmention bellowIagreewiththosepeoplewhowantto
preserveold, historical buildings.
Firstofall, by preserving historical buildingswepassourhistoryto ourfuture
generations.Ithinkthatoutchildrenshould knowtheirhistory,learnfromitandrespect
it.Peopleneedto knowtheir
traditionsandcustoms,whicharepricelessandirreplaceable.Ourhistoryisour
knowledgeand power.Frommy opinion


weneedto preserveandrestorehistorical buildings.By destroyingthemweshowour
disrespectto ourforefathersandtheirtraditions.
Second ofall, by preserving historical buildingsacitycanattractmanytravelers.
Welcomingtouristsacitycan getmany benefitsincludingmoney,whichcan bespenton
preserving historicalbuildingsaswellasonimprovingroadsandfacilities.Also,many

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