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Television programsthatportray violenceareaparamountconcernforparents
nowadays.Recentresearch hasshownthatchildrenmaycommitactsofviolence
becausetheywishtoemulatethebehaviorthattheyseeontelevision.Thisisespecially
truewhen violentactsarecommitted bywell-knownaction“heroes.”Inaddition,
television programsshow


cartoonfigures,aswellasactors,committing violentacts.Usingcomicsituationsto
depictviolentthemescausesfurtherproblemswiththewayinwhich young peopleview
violence.
Television programsthatcontain profane ordisrespectfullanguagealsoworry parents
with youngchildren.Becausecensorshiplawshaverelaxed overthepastfewdecades,
ithasbecomeverycommonfortelevision programsofeachandevery kindtoshow
charactersexpressingimpolite,rude,andinsulting utterancesto oneanother.Bearing
resemblancetothecaseofportrayalsofviolence,children unfortunately oftentryto
imitatetheseactionstheywatch ontheirtelevisionscreens.
Finally,someparentsareupsetaboutthe
moralbehaviordepicted ontelevision.Astheystruggletoteachtheirchildrenmoral
andethicalvalues, parentsmightdespairaboutthelack ofmoralsandethics
representedinsomeoftheso-calledrolemodelsontelevision.Forinstance,certain
charactersnotonly havenoremorsefortheirimmoralactions, butalsofrequently go
unpunished bylargersociety.
Becauseofthesefactors,many parents believethattelevision programssendtheir
youththewrong kindsofmessages.Theemulation ofthispoorbehaviorbytheir
childrenissomethingtheywishtoavoidatallcosts,andthey haveaccordingly
decidedto bantelevisionintheir householdsforthesereasons.


Sample 130


Televisionhashadasignificantinfluenceonthecultureofmanysocieties.To
whatextentwouldyousaythattelevisionhaspositively ornegatively affectedthe
culturaldevelopmentofyoursociety?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Allowyourself 40 minutesforthistask.

modelanswer:


Ithasbeenaroundforty yearssincetelevisionwasfirstintroducedintoAustralian
householdsand peopletoday


stillhavemixed viewsonwhetherithasa positiveoranegativeinfluenceonthesociety.
Many peoplebelievethattelevision damagesculture.Itpromotesthestrongercultures
ofcountriessuchasBritainandNorthAmericaandweakensthecultures oflesswealthy
countries.Thisisbecausethestronger,wealthiercountriesareabletoasserttheirown
cultureby producingmoreprogramsthatareshownwidelyaroundtheworld.These

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