Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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theHarryPotterstories,clearly need nosubsidyatallbecausetheauthorshave
becomerichthroughtheirwriting.


Viewsonwhatgood qualitywritingmeanswillvarywidely,andsoifanyauthoristo be
givenmoneyforwriting,thenthe decisionwould haveto bemadeby acommitteeor
panelofjudge.An
individualopinionwouldcertainlycause disagreementamongthereading public.


Sample 151


Internationalentertainers,includingsportspersonalities, oftenget
paidmillionsofdollarsinoneyear.
Inyourview,withwidespreadpvertyintheworld, arethesehugeearnings
justified?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

Youshouldgivereasonsforyour answerusing yourownideasand
experience.

modelanswer:


Thesalariesofmanysingers, dancersandsportspeoplehaveincreased outofall
proportioninrecentyears,whilein placeslikeSudan peoplearestarvingto death. I do
notbeleivethatanyoneshould beabletoearnsuchenormoussalarieswhansomany
peopleintheworldarelivingin poverty.


Oneafthefactorswhichshouldaffectwhatapersoncanearn oughtto bethe
benefitofperson'sworktosociety.Itis unreasonableforafamoussingerto beable
toearnfarmorefromanevening's
entertainmentthan,forinstance,amedicalscientistwho developsanewdrugwhich
producesatreatmentforacommon disease.Thepopstarcertainly hasavalue


insociety, butthevaluein noway
exceeds, orevenmatches,thevaluegainedfromasuccessfulmedication.


Secondly.work doneshould bepaidaccordingtotheamountofeffortandskillthatgoes
intoit.Nobodywould denythatafamouspersonworkshardandisskillful, yetsuch
peopledo notworkany harderthanthousand ofotherworkerswho have noclaimto
fame.Yetmarketforceare
suchthatthesesuperstartscan obtainmillionsofdolorwhileotherunknown people
sometimesearnlessthanthey needtosurvive.


Finally,itshould bepossiblefor governmentstoworktogethertoensurethatthe
amountofmoneyincirculationshould bemoremoreequallyandfairly


distributed.Thisseemsonlyfairgiventhattherearesomanysuffering.

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