Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

modelanswer:


Somepeoplearguethatthestatedoesnot havetherighttomakeparentsimmunise
theirchildren.However,Ifeelthequestionisnotwhethertheyshouldimmunisebut
whether,asmembersofsociety,they havetherightnotto.
Preventativemedicinehasprovedto bethemosteffectiveway ofreducingtheincidence
offatalchildhood diseases.Asaresultofthewidespread practiceof


immunising youngchildrenin oursociety,manyliveshavebeensavedandthe diseases
havebeenreducedtoalmostzero.In previouscenturieschildren diedfrom ordinary
illnessessuchasinfluenzaandtuberculosisand becausefewpeoplehadimmunity,the
diseasesspreadeasily.Diseasessuchasdysenteryweretheresult ofpoorhygienebut
thesehavelong beeneradicatedsincethearrivalofgoodsanitationandcleanwater.
Nobodywouldsuggestthatweshouldreversethisgood practicenowbecausedysentery
hasbeenwiped out.
Seriousdiseasessuchaspolioandsmallpox havealso beeneradicatedthrough
nationalimmunisation programmes.Inconsequence,children notimmunisedarefar
lessatriskinthis disease-freesocietythantheywould


otherwisebe.Parentschoosing nottoimmunisearerelying onthefactthatthe
diseaseshavealready beeneradicated.Ifthenumberofparentschoosing notto
immuniseincreased,therewould beasimilarincreaseintherisk ofthediseases
returning.
Immunisationisnotanissuelikeseatbeltswhichaffectsonlytheindividual. A decision
nottoimmunisewillhavewidespreadrepercussionsforthewholeofsocietyandforthis
reason,Ido not
believethatindividualshavetherighttostandaside.Inmy opinionimmunisation
should beobligatory.


Sample 156


Disruptiveschoolstudentshavea


negativeinfluenceonothers.
Studentswho arenoisy anddisobedientshouldbegroupedtogetherandtaught
separately.
Do youagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswer.


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.
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