Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

(Axel Boer) #1

thoseofdoctors,lawyers,teachersorsocialworkers.Thereissomedebateabout
whethersuch outrageously highsalariesarejustified.


Ontheonehand,sportisviewedasa professionalcareer,inwhichthetop players
shouldrightlyearn highsalaries.Athletestrainrigorouslyfromanearlyageto become
peak performersintheirfield.Theyfacetremendouspressureineachandevery game,
match orcompetition.Their personallivesarecompromisedandtheyloseallprivacy.At
thesametime,theirstrongachievementsbring honourandattention, notonlyto
themselves, butalsototheirteams,schools,citiesorcountries.


Ontheotherhand, variousprofessionscontributetomaking ourworldrunsmoothly.
Doctorsputinatleastten years ofgruelingstudyandinternship;theirworksaveslives.
Teacherseducateandinspireyoung peopleto beresponsiblecitizens:theirefforts
producethecitizens


oftomorrow.Socialworkersrescueindividualsfacing physical,mentaland
psychologicalchallenges:theirinterventioncreatessafersocieties.


Yet, professionalsinthefieldsabove usuallystruggleto getby, despitetheirmeaningful
andcriticalcontributiontotheworld.


Inmy view, payingenormoussalariestosportspeopleisunnecessary.Weneedto
reconsideroursocialprioritiesandeliminatethegreatdisparityinincomereceived by
diverseprofessionals.By doingso,wecan buildsocietiesinwhicheach onefeels
valued,appreciatedandappropriatelycompensatedfortheirown vocation or
specialization.


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Sample 165


Insomecountries, youngpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelfora year
betweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discussthe
advantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.


Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourown
knowledgeorexperience.


Writeatleast 250 words.


Takinga“gap year”offbetween highschooland university hasbecomea
popularoptionamongmany young people.


Thistimeoffprovidesabreakaftermany yearsofformalstudy.Somestudentsusethis
timetotravelaroundtheworld, others volunteerandstillothersbeginworking.Theidea
behindeach oftheseactivitiesisto dosomething hands-onandrefreshing,which
enablesyoung peopletolearnmoreaboutthemselvesandtheirplaceintheworld
aroundthem.

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