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his bestselling autobiography serialised in the
newspapers or made into a successful film. The
victim might be forgiven for thinking, ‘Some
of that fame has been got at my expense. The
criminal gets the money and I get nothing.
What is more, I am not a celebrity because no
one is really interested in my injuries or losses,
only in his wickedness.’
But, persuasive as it may be, is this
reasoning sound? Are there any assumptions
hidden behind the strong language? Arguably,
yes. For a start you would have to assume that
there really is a ‘right’ of the kind the author
claims for the victim. People have rights not to
be harmed by others, but those rights are dealt
with by the courts when they hand out their
sentences. Once such sentences have been
served, is there really a continuing right for
the victim never to see the criminal doing
well? Arguably, no – as we shall see when we
look at further argument in the next unit.
What the author is asking us to accept in
this paragraph is that allowing criminals to
exercise their rights to a fresh start is unfair to
their former victims. But this requires another
major assumption. It is the assumption that if
victims and criminals both have rights, the
victim’s rights should come first. Without this
assumption there are no grounds for the
conclusion; for if, as the counter-argument
claims, an ex-convict has the same rights as
anyone else, then it is hard to see how the
author can claim that the victim should have
some special right over the criminal. This is a
potential weakness in the argument, and it is
one we will return to in Chapter 4.10.
Conclusion
So we come to the last paragraph, which
consists of the conclusion and a further
sub-argument. It has two strands. One is that
people freely choose to become criminals; and
that if they make that choice they should be
barred from future (‘respectable’) wealth. The
other is that if people thinking of becoming
criminals know they will be effectively
just by discrediting those who may use it. Yet it
is surprising how often this strategy is used.
What you can legitimately say is that if the
only support for some point of view comes
from an obviously unreliable source and from
no other, then we ought to treat it with some
suspicion. But that is a very different matter
from saying, as the author does in this case,
that because certain people ‘would say that,
wouldn’t they!’, the substance of what they say
must be false.
Another counter-argument and response
follow in the fourth paragraph. Critically
evaluate the reasoning in this paragraph,
identifying any assumptions and/or flaws
that it contains.
Activity
Commentary
You probably picked up straight away that
there was another ad hominem argument here.
The claim that a concern for the rights of
ex-convicts is ‘typical of... woolly-minded
liberals’ is obviously directed at the person
rather than their argument. However, the
author does go on to say why such concerns are
misplaced, and here the argument is much
stronger. Thus if you ignore the ad hominem part
of the paragraph you are still left with two or
three reasons that do respond to the objection,
and (if true) also support the author’s own
argument. These are the claims that:
• victims also have rights, one of which is
the right not to see those who hurt them
enjoying wealth and celebrity
• victims don’t get the same chances (of
celebrity) as ex-convicts.
These are powerfully persuasive points. You can
easily imagine how frustrating and insulting it
would be for someone who had been attacked
or robbed to later watch the person who had
done this hosting a television show, or seeing