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increasetheirknowledgeofthemselvesand oftheworldaroundthem.
Careerpreparationisprobablytheprimaryreasonthatpeopleattendcollege.These
days,thejobmarketisverycompetitive.Careerssuchasinformationtechnologywill
needmany newworkersinthenearfuture.Atcollege,studentscanlearn newskillsfor
thesecareersandincreasetheir opportunitiesforthefuture.
Studentsalso gotocollegeto havenewexperiences.Formany,itistheirfirsttime
awayfromhome.Atcollege,theycan
meetnewpeoplefrommany different places.Theycanseewhatlifeislikein a different
city.Theycanlearntoliveontheirownandtakecareofthemselveswithouthavingtheir
familyalwaysnearby.Atcollege,studentshavetheopportunity
toincreasetheirknowledge.Asthey
decidewhattheywanttostudy, pursuetheirstudies,andinteractwiththeirclassmates,
theylearnalotaboutthemselves.Theyalso, ofcourse, havethe opportunitytolearn
aboutmanysubjectsintheirclasses.Inadditiontotheskillsand knowledgerelatedto
theircareer,collegestudentsalso havethechancetotakeclassesin otherareas.For
many,thiswillbetheirlastchancetostudy differentsubjects.
Collegesoffermuchmorethancareer preparation.They offertheopportunityto have
newexperiencesandtolearnmany kindsofthings.Ithinkallofthesearereasonswhy
peopleattendcollege.


Sample 148


Thepositionofwomeninsocietyhaschangedmarkedlyinthelasttwenty years.
Many oftheproblemsyoungpeoplenowexperience,suchasjuveniledelinquency,
arisefromthefactthatmanymarriedwomennowworkandarenotathometocare
fortheirchildren.
Towhatextentdo youagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.

Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

Youshouldgivereasonsforyour answerusing yourownideasand
experience.

modelanswer:


Itiscertainlytruethattheposition ofwomeninsociety hasundergonea dramatic
changeinthepasttwenty years butIdo notfeelthatthisisadirectcause ofthe
indisputableincreaseinjuvenile-related problemsduringthisperiod.
Itisnowacceptedthatyoungwomenshouldfindwork onleavingschool;indeedtorely
totally ontheirparents'financialsupportisnolongeran optioninmanyfamilies.
Likewise, oncethey getmarried,themajority ofwomencontinueworkingsincethe
financialpressuresofsetting upahouseandestablishing a
reasonablestandard ofliving oftenrequiretwoincomes.


Twenty yearsagoitwascommonforwomento giveupwork oncethey hadchildren
and devotetheirtimetocaringfortheirchildren.Thisisnolongerthe generalrule
andtheprovision of

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