Best Practice Book for IELTS Writing

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professionally-runchildcarefacilitiesand day nurserieshaveremovedmuch ofthe
responsibilityforchildrearingthatusedtofalltomothers.However,thesefacilities
comeatacostand oftenrequiretwosalariescomingintoafamilyto beafforded.
Ido notbelievethattheincreaseinthe numberofworkingmothershasresultedin
children being broughtuplesswellthan previously.Indeeditcould bearguedthat by
givingmotherstheopportunitytoworkandearnextramoneychildrencan be
betterprovidedforthan previously.Thereismoremoneyforluxuriesand holidays


andamoresecurefamilylifeispossible.Ofcoursetherearelimitsastotheamount of
timethatideallyshould bespentawayfromhomeandtheidealscenariowould
beforoneoftheparents(oftenthewife)to haveapart-timejobandthusbe
availablefortheirchildren beforeandafterschool.Itisimportanttoestablishthe
correctbalancebetweenfamilylifeandworkinglife.


Sample 149


Youshouldspendabout 40 minutesonthistask.


"Preventionisbetterthancure."
Outofacountry'shealthbudget, alargeproportionshouldbedivertedfrom
treatmenttospending onhealth


educationandpreventativemeasures.Towhatextentdo youagreeordisagree
withthisstatement?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.


modelanswer:


Ofcourseitgoeswithoutsayingthat preventionisbetterthancure.Thatiswhy,in
recentyears,therehasbeenagrowing body ofopinioninfavourofputtingmore
resourcesinto healtheducationand preventivemeasures.Theargumentisthat
ignoranceof,forexample, basichygiene
orthedangersofan unhealthy dietorlifestyleneedstobecombatted byspecial
nationwidepublicitycampaigns,aswellas


longer-termhealtheducation.Obviously,thereisastrong humanargumentforcatching
anymedicalconditionasearlyaspossible.Thereisalsoaneconomicargumentfor
doingso.Statisticsdemonstratethecost-effectivenessoftreatingaconditioninthe
earlystages,ratherthan delaying untilmoreexpensiveand prolongedtreatment
isnecessary.Thentherearesocialoreconomiccosts, perhapsintermsofloss of
earningsforthefamilyconcerned or unemployed benefitpaid bythestate.
Sofarso good, butthedifficultiesstartwhenwetryto definewhatthe'proportion' ofthe
budgetshould be, particularlyifthefundswillbe'divertedfromtreatment'.Decisionson
exactly howmuch ofthe
totalhealth budgetshould bespentinthiswayarenotamatterforthenon-specialist,

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