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thehospitalorthecommunitytocarrythecost.Infact,itcouldalso bearguedthat
thosewhosmokein publicshould be
askedto payextrabecauseoftheillness


causedto passivesmokers.


Inconclusion,Ifeelthatsmokersshould paymoreincasesrelatedtosmoking, butfor
any otherillnesstheyshould paythesameasanyoneelse.


Sample 153


Wearebecomingincreasinglydependentoncomputers.They areusedin
businesses,hospitals,crimedetection andeventoflyplanes.
Whatthingswilltheybeusedforinthefuture?Isthisdependenceoncomputers a
goodthing orshouldwehemore auspiciousoftheirbenefits?


Youshouldwriteatleast 250 words.
Youshouldspendabout 40 minutes onthistask.

modelanswer:


Computersarearelatively newinvention.Thefirstcomputerswerebuiltfifty yearsago
anditisonlyinthelastthirty orso yearsthattheirinfluencehasaffected oureveryday
life.Personalcomputerswereintroducedasrecentlyastheearly
eighties.Inthisshorttimethey havemadeatremendousimpacton ourlives.Weare
nowso dependentoncomputersthatitis hardtoimaginewhatthingswould belike
todaywithoutthem.You haveonly gotto gointoabankwhentheirmaincomputer
isbrokentoappreciatethechaosthat
would occurifcomputersweresuddenlyremovedworld-wide.
Inthefuturecomputerswillbeusedtocreatebiggerandevenmoresophisticated
computers.Theprospectsforthisarequitealarming.Theywillbesocomplexthatno
individualcould hopeto understand howtheywork.Theywillbringalotofbenefits but
theywillalsoincreasethepotentialfor unimaginablechaos.Theywill,forexample, be
abletofly planesandthey
willbeabletoco ordinatethemovements ofseveralplanesinthevicinity ofanairport.
Providingallthecomputersareworkingcorrectly nothingcan gowrong.If onesmall
programfailsdisaster.
Thereisacertaininevitabilitythattechnologywillprogressand become
increasinglycomplex.Weshould, however,ensurethatwearestillin a


positionwhereweareabletocontroltechnology.Itwillbealltooeasytosuddenly
discoverthattechnologyiscontrolling us.BythenitmightbetoolateIbelievethatitis
veryimportantto besuspiciousofthebenefitsthatcomputerswillbringandtomake
surethatwenever becometotally dependentonacompletelytechnologicalworld.

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